<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399</id><updated>2012-02-16T01:59:17.455-06:00</updated><category term='Free Stuff'/><category term='Current Novel Info'/><category term='ProAuthorLinks'/><category term='Videos for Novelists'/><category term='Bestselling Novels'/><category term='product reviews'/><category term='State of the Genres'/><category term='How To Articles'/><category term='Bestselling Novelists'/><category term='Novelist Humor'/><title type='text'>ProNovelWriter</title><subtitle type='html'>Goal: You on the Bestsellers List</subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>21</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-2318483791660717967</id><published>2011-03-29T15:55:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2011-12-05T18:07:16.393-06:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novelist Humor'/><title type='text'>True Quote</title><content type='html'>&lt;div class="quote"&gt;"A blank piece of paper is God’s way of telling us how hard it is to be God."&lt;/div&gt;                  &lt;div class="caption"&gt;           &lt;p&gt;-Sidney          Sheldon (1917-2007)&lt;/p&gt;         &lt;/div&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-2318483791660717967?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/2318483791660717967/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2011/03/true-quote.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/2318483791660717967'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/2318483791660717967'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2011/03/true-quote.html' title='True Quote'/><author><name>Sebastiene</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/08558750543540408770</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-5838511983581602607</id><published>2010-09-12T19:20:00.001-05:00</published><updated>2010-09-12T19:21:59.479-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Videos for Novelists'/><title type='text'>The Typewriter Dance Video</title><content type='html'>&lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;The Typewriter Dance&lt;/span&gt;: Only if you've spent days/months/years writing novels will this appeal to you, but how can you resist music made partly with a typewriter? And you can sort of see which parts of the typewriter they used, as well. (6 min. [the last 30 seconds are blank])&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ul&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-4665573800981650132?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/4665573800981650132/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2010/09/proauthorlinks-query-letters.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/4665573800981650132'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/4665573800981650132'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2010/09/proauthorlinks-query-letters.html' title='ProAuthorLinks: Query Letters'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-2817810336803548723</id><published>2009-09-28T11:07:00.008-05:00</published><updated>2009-09-28T11:27:30.574-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Bestselling Novels'/><title type='text'>Unraveling the Secrets of Marketing a Bestseller</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SsDjH-J3nlI/AAAAAAAACkE/ssUBzQhxNOE/s1600-h/51jHvD-ZUrL._SL500_AA240_.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 200px; height: 200px;" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SsDjH-J3nlI/AAAAAAAACkE/ssUBzQhxNOE/s200/51jHvD-ZUrL._SL500_AA240_.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5386554880418094674" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;Dan Brown's &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;The Lost Symbol&lt;/span&gt; sold 2 million copies in its first week. That wasn't an accident.
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&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;The Globe and Mail&lt;/span&gt; has written a great piece on just some of the extraordinary marketing that has gone into promoting Brown's latest novel. You can read it here: &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.theglobeandmail.com/report-on-business/industry-news/marketing/unravelling-the-secrets-of-a-marketing-bestseller/article1300528/"&gt;Unraveling the secrets of a marketing bestseller.&lt;/a&gt;
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Two telling quotes from the article:
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"When Dan Brown's new novel &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385504225?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=pnovelw-20&amp;amp;linkCode=as2&amp;amp;camp=1789&amp;amp;creative=390957&amp;amp;creativeASIN=0385504225"&gt;The Lost Symbol&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=pnovelw-20&amp;amp;l=as2&amp;amp;o=1&amp;amp;a=0385504225" alt="" style="border: medium none  ! important; margin: 0px ! important;" width="1" border="0" height="1" /&gt; hit stores this month, literary critics complained it read more like the treatment for a Hollywood thriller."
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"The main lesson for publishers and marketers in the success of &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385504225?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=pnovelw-20&amp;amp;linkCode=as2&amp;amp;camp=1789&amp;amp;creative=390957&amp;amp;creativeASIN=0385504225"&gt;The Lost Symbol&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=pnovelw-20&amp;amp;l=as2&amp;amp;o=1&amp;amp;a=0385504225" alt="" style="border: medium none  ! important; margin: 0px ! important;" width="1" border="0" height="1" /&gt; is this: 'Find hits.'"
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Why is it still controversial to talk about trying to write commercial fiction that makes lots and lots of readers happy? "Literary critics complained." Are these the same literary critics who led me to have to read Faulkner when I was in school? Are these critics people with the same sensibilities who pick the most depressing movies possible for Best Picture Oscars?
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There needs to be two types of critics: one set for the literary market, and another set of critics for commercial fiction. Right now, all commercial fiction has is the reading public who are voting with their wallets. If that's the case, they are hugely out-voting literary critics... again.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-2817810336803548723?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/2817810336803548723/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/unraveling-secrets-of-marketing.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/2817810336803548723'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/2817810336803548723'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/unraveling-secrets-of-marketing.html' title='Unraveling the Secrets of Marketing a Bestseller'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SsDjH-J3nlI/AAAAAAAACkE/ssUBzQhxNOE/s72-c/51jHvD-ZUrL._SL500_AA240_.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-1038509153497172828</id><published>2009-09-24T11:57:00.013-05:00</published><updated>2011-12-05T19:13:29.995-06:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Bestselling Novelists'/><title type='text'>Bestselling Author Websites</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sr0H0oT681I/AAAAAAAACjc/T5u5y0WfLL8/s1600-h/N_bestsellingnovelistlips250x250.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 200px; height: 200px;" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sr0H0oT681I/AAAAAAAACjc/T5u5y0WfLL8/s200/N_bestsellingnovelistlips250x250.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5385469330160546642" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;Almost all bestselling authors' websites add something special to readers' experiences. Some have free content, all have snazzy photos, and die-hard fans can find out when the author will next be out in the public. If you study the websites below, you might get some ideas of what you can add to your website to make it more reader-friendly and professional.





Everyone listed here has been a New York Times Bestselling Author recently.





One thing of note: While it's true that many of these sites were created by the author's publishing house, &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;not one of them has a word count meter on it&lt;/span&gt;! Not one. Is it possible that word count meters are the mark of an amateur? Or readers don't care? Perhaps it takes away from the magic?





&lt;ul&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.sandrabrown.net/"&gt;Sandra Brown&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.patconroy.com/"&gt;Pat Conroy&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.cusslerbooks.com/"&gt;Clive Cussler&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.teddekker.com/"&gt;Ted Dekker&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.evanovich.com/"&gt;Janet Evanovich&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.christinefeehan.com/"&gt;Christine Feehan&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.terrygoodkind.com/"&gt;Terry Goodkind&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.philippagregory.com/"&gt;Philippa Gregory&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.charlaineharris.com/"&gt;Charlaine Harris&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://laurenkatebooks.net/"&gt;Lauren Kate&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.randomhouse.com/doubleday/dexter/"&gt;Jeff Lindsay&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.stephenking.com/index.html"&gt;Stephen King&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.deankoontz.com/"&gt;Dean Koontz&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.stepheniemeyer.com/"&gt;Stephenie Meyer&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.karenmoning.com/"&gt;Karen Moning&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.jamespatterson.com/"&gt;James Patterson&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://kathyreichs.com/"&gt;Kathy Reichs&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.annerice.com/"&gt;Anne Rice&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.noraroberts.com/"&gt;Nora Roberts&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.nicholassparks.com/"&gt;Nicholas Sparks&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.kathrynstockett.com/"&gt;Kathryn Stockett&lt;/a&gt;
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Having trouble coming up with a storyline? Having trouble distilling your 200,000-word manuscript into a single sentence summary?
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Fear not! Run, do not walk, over to &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://wondermark.com/554/"&gt;Wondermark.com&lt;/a&gt; where your plot line will be revealed... or at least you'll have a stonking-good laugh, which is what I just had.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-5910024775088735969?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/5910024775088735969/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/electro-plasmic-hydrocephalic-genre.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/5910024775088735969'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/5910024775088735969'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/electro-plasmic-hydrocephalic-genre.html' title='The Electro-Plasmic Hydrocephalic Genre-Fiction Generator 2000!'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Srri_hQ5CaI/AAAAAAAAChw/9ZPiKLeZozU/s72-c/genrefictiongeneratorWondermark350x330.gif' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-3896487662289261916</id><published>2009-09-21T14:37:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2009-09-21T14:38:41.985-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Videos for Novelists'/><title type='text'>Algonquin Books Executive Editor Chuck Adams &amp; Literary Agent Sally Hill</title><content type='html'>&lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="font-weight:bold;"&gt;Straight from the Experts&lt;/span&gt;: Literary agent Sally Hill McMillan and Algonquin Books Executive Editor Chuck Adams discuss what they do and how they do it. If you want to be successfully published, you need to know as much as you can about how the publishing industry actually works. The answers by Chuck Adams are especially helpful. (You can listen to this in the background. You don't need to actually watch it.)(1 hr. 5 min.)&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;I wrote 3/4th of my current novel and got stuck, so I sat down and wrote the
entire story as a screenplay. Hooray! &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Now I have a working plot with a story arch that makes a lot more sense. The
next thing to do is rework the novel to better fit the screenplay story arch,
adding, deleting, and modifying where necessary. There are 30 sections, although
they don't break exactly as chapters. My goal is to print out copies for beta
readers on September 17th. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;All well-wishing is gratefully accepted. And let me know if you put up a post
about your own writing goal. I'd love to comment some encouragement for you.
&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;u&gt;30 Sections&lt;/u&gt;: &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;1. Reworked 8.4.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;2. Reworked 8.4.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;3. Reworked 8.4.09, partially
critiqued 8.6.09, partial edits incorporated 8.6.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;4. Reworked 8.5.09, partially
critiqued 8.6.09, partial edits incorporated 8.6.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;5. Reworked 8.6-8.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;6. Reworked 8.7-8.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;7. Reworked 8.8.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;8. Reworked 8.9-10.09.
&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;9. Reworked 8.10.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;10. Reworked 8.11.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;11. Reworked 8.11.09.&lt;/span&gt;


&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;12. Reworked 8.12-14.09.&lt;/span&gt;


&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;13. Reworked 8.15.09.&lt;/span&gt;


&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;14. Reworked 8.24.09.&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;15. Reworked 8.25.09.&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;16. Reworked 8.26.09.&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;17. Reworked 8.28.09.&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;18. Reworked 8.29-30.09.&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;19. Reworked 6.30.09, critiqued
7.4.09, edits incorporated 7.10.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;20. Reworked 6.30.09, partially
critiqued 7.4.09, partial edits incorporated 7.10.09. &lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;21. Reworked 7.10-20.09,
partially critiqued 7.16.09, partial edits incorporated 7.16.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;22. Reworked 8.30.09-9.3.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;23. Reworked 9.4.09-9.7.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;24. Reworked 9.8.09-9.10.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;25. Reworked 9.11.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;26. Reworked 9.11-12.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;27. Reworked 9.12.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;28. Reworked 9.12.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;29. Reworked 9.13-14.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;span style="background-color: rgb(202, 213, 255);"&gt;30. Reworked 9.15-16.09&lt;/span&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I format pages to be about 1,000 words per page as I work. So while it looks
like I'm only writing a 100-page story below, that actually adds up to more
than 100,000 words. This is just a rough idea to try and keep on track: &lt;/p&gt;


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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" valign="bottom" width="33%" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.10.09
     - pp. 18-21

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.30.09
     - pp. 52-58&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.11.09
     - pp. 22-23

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.31.09
     - pp. 59-63&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.12.09
     - pp. 24-25

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" width="33%" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.1.09
     - pp. Organizing.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.13.09
     - pp. --------

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.2.09
     - pp. 64-66&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.14.09
     - pp. 26-27

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.3.09
     - pp. 67-70&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.15.09
     - pp. 28-31

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.4.09
     - pp. --------&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.16.09
     - Working in old edits.

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.5.09
     - pp. 71-73&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.17.09
     - Working in old edits.

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.6.09
     - pp. --------&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.18.09
     - Working in old edits.

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.7.09
     - pp. 74-75&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.19.09
     - Working in old edits.

     &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.8.09
     - pp. 76-77&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.20.09
     - Working in old edits.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.9.09
     - pp. 77-78&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" width="33%" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.21.09
     - Working in old edits.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.10.09
     - pp. 79-80 + editing.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.22.09
     - Working in old edits.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.11.09
     - pp. 81-83&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.23.09
     - -------------&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.12.09
     - pp. 84-86&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.24.09
     - pp. 35-37&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.13.09
     - 87-88&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.25.09
     - pp. 38-40&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.14.09
     - 89 + Editing.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.26.09
     - pp. 41-42&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.15.09
     - Editing&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.27.09
     - pp. 43&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.16.09
     - 90-92&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
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   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.28.09
     - pp. 44-45&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.17.09
     - Editing.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
 &lt;/tr&gt;
 &lt;tr bg="" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;8.29.09
     - pp. 46-51&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
   &lt;td bg="" style="color: rgb(202, 213, 255);" align="center"&gt;&lt;span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family:Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;" &gt;9.18.09
     - Printing out copies.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;/object&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-5029435698360478253?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/5029435698360478253/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/philippa-gregory-on-writing.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/5029435698360478253'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/5029435698360478253'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/philippa-gregory-on-writing.html' title='Philippa Gregory on Writing'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-2527431637083876745</id><published>2009-09-10T15:59:00.013-05:00</published><updated>2009-09-10T16:46:28.948-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Current Novel Info'/><title type='text'>Novel Details - All This About a Coat</title><content type='html'>&lt;p&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sqlque6DMII/AAAAAAAACcM/n2DYr5ZZga4/s1600-h/US_Navy_p_coat_wiki430x430.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 200px; height: 200px;" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sqlque6DMII/AAAAAAAACcM/n2DYr5ZZga4/s200/US_Navy_p_coat_wiki430x430.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5379948576673837186" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;Far 
  too much ado about a pea coat. These are the trials of novelists. The devil 
  isn't in the details. The devil is when a reader throws your novel across the 
  room because you've made an egregious error in your research.&lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  I had a simple question. Did the Royal Navy wear pea coats during World War 
  II? Not great coats. Not dress coats. Pea coats. &lt;br /&gt;
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  You'd think that would be dead-simple to answer. Wrong. After scouring the internet 
  for what turned out to be &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;a couple of hours&lt;/span&gt; 
  (did I really spend that much time on this?), I learned that "pea coats" were 
  sometimes called "reefer coats", but other sites insist they were separate things 
  and "reefer coats" were only worn by officers. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  And that doesn't begin to answer my question because it directly relates to 
  neither the Royal Navy, nor World War II. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  The U.S. Navy wore pea coats during World War II. I know that because I've now 
  seen enough photographs of blue wool coats to last a lifetime. Only the government-appointed 
  garment manufacturers have seen more.&lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SqlqTUB5qJI/AAAAAAAACcE/Cd3FAVjSRoc/s1600-h/800px-Bundeswehrmuseum_Dresden_19.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 320px; height: 240px;" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SqlqTUB5qJI/AAAAAAAACcE/Cd3FAVjSRoc/s320/800px-Bundeswehrmuseum_Dresden_19.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5379948109897509010" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
  Apparently, the Germans wore pea coats. Wow. Look at that. (Image with manikins, 
  far right.) Eight buttons. A beautiful coat. Shame is was worn in the name of 
  pure evil. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  And then back to my search.... &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  This is great. The U.K. government has issued Royal Navy uniform stamps. The 
  stamp featuring a Captain in World War II? He's not even wearing a blue coat, 
  much less the style I'm wondering about. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  The quote about that stamp is, "1st Class - Captain 1941. Keeping warm and dry 
  on convoy duty during World War II often meant supplementing uniform issue with 
  extra clothing." Brown coat. No help. And what extra clothes? I don't see extra 
  clothes, unless they mean the brown coat. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sqlrs93BSMI/AAAAAAAACcU/yvohJBYNGbQ/s1600-h/090917-royal_navy_uniforms_1st.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 200px; height: 97px;" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sqlrs93BSMI/AAAAAAAACcU/yvohJBYNGbQ/s200/090917-royal_navy_uniforms_1st.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5379949650134517954" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;
  The good people over at &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.seayourhistory.org.uk/content/view/640/808/1/3/"&gt;Sea 
  Your History&lt;/a&gt; tried to be helpful. They said, "During World War Two it was 
  difficult to get supplies of naval uniform. This meant that sometimes crews 
  of smaller ships couldn't follow the naval dress rules. These sailors wore non-uniform 
  items like knitted blue jumpers and scarves." But what about their coats!? &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  The Royal Navy website has photographs of all of the uniforms, but I think the 
  Royal Navy must get awfully cold because they show almost no outer-wear! &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  I found one coat I did rather fall in love with. I won't steal the person's 
  photograph, but while the link is active, you can see the coat &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.vintagetrends.com/military/itemdetails.asp?YZ=9C9BA2A1878892&amp;amp;RN=24&amp;amp;TR=62&amp;amp;SS=&amp;amp;MC=Military+Vintage&amp;amp;CA=Men&amp;amp;SC=Jackets%2FCoats&amp;amp;ST=Navy+Pea+Coat"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;. 
  Ten buttons, navy blue, corduroy pocket lining. No word if it's U.S. Navy or 
  Royal Navy, only that it's 1940s. Drat. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  And after all that searching, I ended up on eBay.co.uk and found that a man 
  is selling his grandfather's Royal Navy duffle coat in mint condition for £5.50. 
  (Gorgeous coat. Why not wear it yourself, sir?) But most of my readers are more 
  likely to be able to picture a pea coat then a duffle coat. If I hadn't seen 
  the photo, I wouldn't know. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  All this about a pea coat. And I still don't know for certain. I'm just going 
  to have to make the coat in my novel antique, rather than a World War II antique. 
  And I ended up losing so much time. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  However, I got an email from my friend Sandi, today. She lost hours searching 
  for a rare brochure she needs for the research of her novel. So it isn't just 
  me. &lt;br /&gt;
  &lt;br /&gt;
  In the end, these are the things we have to do to get it right, no matter how 
  frustrating that may be. Why? Because the most important thing is &lt;em&gt;happy 
  readers&lt;/em&gt;. Readers who don't throw your book across the room.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-2527431637083876745?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/2527431637083876745/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/novel-details-all-this-about-coat.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/2527431637083876745'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/2527431637083876745'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/novel-details-all-this-about-coat.html' title='Novel Details - All This About a Coat'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/Sqlque6DMII/AAAAAAAACcM/n2DYr5ZZga4/s72-c/US_Navy_p_coat_wiki430x430.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-6225729720078870550</id><published>2009-09-03T14:46:00.005-05:00</published><updated>2009-09-03T15:08:35.327-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Bestselling Novelists'/><title type='text'>The Only Color Photograph of Leo Tolstoy, 1908.</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SqAdO0VhlII/AAAAAAAACbs/sj82JgquFMc/s1600-h/TolstoyLeoColor.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; display: block; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; width: 400px; height: 400px;" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SqAdO0VhlII/AAAAAAAACbs/sj82JgquFMc/s400/TolstoyLeoColor.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5377330095484671106" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;This is the only known color photograph of Leo Tolstoy. (&lt;i&gt;War and Peace&lt;/i&gt; and &lt;i&gt;Anna Karenina. &lt;/i&gt;Yes, that Tolstoy.) It was taken in 1908. That's not a typo. An extraordinary photographer named Sergey Prokudin-Gorsky created his own means of color photography. He was hired by the Czar and went all over Russia chronicling life at that time.
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The photographs look like a modern movie set because you've probably never seen color photographs from this era. Certainly if you write historical fiction for this era, you must study these photographs. His plates and negatives are now owned by the U.S. Library of Congress.
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You can see a great slideshow at &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.newsweek.com/id/214585"&gt;Newsweek&lt;/a&gt;.
You can see more of these extraordinary photographs at the &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://memory.loc.gov/pp/prokhtml/prokback.html#formats"&gt;Library of Congress&lt;/a&gt; page.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-6225729720078870550?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/6225729720078870550/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/only-color-photograph-of-leo-tolstoy.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/6225729720078870550'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/6225729720078870550'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/09/only-color-photograph-of-leo-tolstoy.html' title='The Only Color Photograph of Leo Tolstoy, 1908.'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SqAdO0VhlII/AAAAAAAACbs/sj82JgquFMc/s72-c/TolstoyLeoColor.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-1323417984586541669</id><published>2009-08-30T19:34:00.006-05:00</published><updated>2009-08-30T19:56:19.160-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novelist Humor'/><title type='text'>Font Fight</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpsfaoDoEkI/AAAAAAAACaE/JqWrpck1dGA/s1600-h/Arial%27sGang.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 200px; height: 200px;" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpsfaoDoEkI/AAAAAAAACaE/JqWrpck1dGA/s200/Arial%27sGang.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5375925122486506050" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;
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At last! Arial Font gets what's coming to her. (The fact that most of this site is in Arial font is completely beside the point.)
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&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;The initial idea:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;a) Once you know the apotheosis - the seminal insight the hero has - then you can build your story up to and beyond that point. Knowing the hero's apotheosis allows you to decide what the hero's restrictions will be and how to overcome them (atonement with the father). Knowing the hero's apotheosis allows you to decide the hero's inner resolve and actions upon the enlightenment (ultimate boon).&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;b) Writing about what you know gives you the insights and intimacy that will add richness and differentiate your work; writing about what you don't know is a good idea if the topic inspires you enough to sustain you through the research until you do become insightful and intimate with your subject; your passion with the idea must sustain you through the long hours of writing and the arduous process of selling your work; people have much more applicable tacit knowledge than they realise, for example, your experience of office politics could contribute to a story set in the White House.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Use the broad Hero's Journey&lt;/b&gt; to expand your idea into a broad step outline. Here characters and situations will begin to emerge. Flesh out multiple ideas to increase the certainty of committing to an appropriate one.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Use the detailed Hero's Journey&lt;/b&gt; to expand your idea into a detailed step outline. Start a file with the relevant number of sections and begin collecting research (newspaper clippings etc) that will add value to each stage of your step outline. Build the step outline until characters and situations have distinct form and substance.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Write out each stage of your story in a few paragraphs.&lt;/b&gt; If you use the detailed Hero's Journey then you will have anywhere between 51 and 106 paragraphs. Here, write first and edit later (separate creative from critical thinking). If you need input from other people, do not show them the whole story - simply show them a stage at a time and give or take options for improvement - this way their help will be more useful and they can avoid having to be diplomatic or nice.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Do the above until you have a coherent story.&lt;/b&gt; You know you have a coherent story when you can list each sequence and know its purpose. This is a useful method of analysing plot at a glance.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;You will get to a point when you need to &lt;b&gt;write out each stage fully in screenplay form (format)&lt;/b&gt;, explore the situations and characters within and their dialogue. Allow each stage to occupy its natural length and space. Good (free) screenwriting software and examples of screenwriting form can be found at BBC Writers Room. Professionals use Final Draft. Do not rush to this stage - ensure that your story is well developed beforehand - once you commit words in screenplay form, the emotional attachment to them and resistance to critical evaluation both increase. With a well developed story in hand, it is not unusual for it to (almost) effortlessly roll out in screenplay form.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Allow yourself time to &lt;b&gt;incubate on your work so far.&lt;/b&gt; You have written a significant amount of your screenplay but now you want to be able to judge its logic and the scene quality from a distance.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;The words-on-paper first draft: &lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;If you have written less than a full screenplay, then write out each stage more fully in screenplay form and make each stage richer. Try and make each stage a story and an event in its own right. You will instantly know what to do with some stages but will still need to incubate until you achieve insight with others. Your focus should be on the quality of each stage rather than length. It is better to add extra sequences than unnaturally expand stages in order to reach length (some more backstory, for example, or examine the detailed Hero's Journey for more ideas). The more screenplays you complete, the easier it becomes to push a story out to the required length (between 113-120 pages).&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;If your problem is cutting down material, then you have to learn brevity. Given that the total length of a screenplay should be no more than 120 pages, decide how long each section should be and reduce each stage to that length, making sure that you retain value. Dividing 120 by the number of stages in your story is a useful benchmark, but often some stages are naturally longer than others, for example, in the Hero's Journey, it is not unusual for the Road of Trials to be longer than the Apotheosis.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Another period of incubation&lt;/b&gt; will be required until you are able to review your work objectively. Rewriting, cutting and pasting etc will be required. You will move onto second and third drafts.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;You will begin to explore selling opportunities,&lt;/b&gt; whilst continuing to polish your work and moving onto another story. If you have existing credibility within the industry, you will explore selling opportunities at the idea or treatment stage. Decision makers do read work so the higher the quality, the more likelihood of it being pushed further. But how long do you wait? How many times do you incubate and rewrite? Will it ever be perfect? Your decision.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;The &lt;b&gt;188 stage Hero’s Journey&lt;/b&gt; and the &lt;b&gt;FREE 17 stage Hero’s Journey&lt;/b&gt; and other story structure templates can be found at http://www.managing-creativity.com/  You can also receive a regular, free newsletter by entering your email address at this site. Kal Bishop, MBA, is a management consultant based in London, UK. His specialties include Knowledge Management and Creativity and Innovation Management. He has consulted in the visual media and software industries and for clients such as Toshiba and Transport for London. He has led Improv, creativity and innovation workshops, exhibited artwork in San Francisco, Los Angeles and London and written a number of screenplays. He is a passionate traveler. He can be reached at &lt;a target="_new" rel="nofollow" href="http://www.managing-creativity.com/"&gt;http://www.managing-creativity.com&lt;/a&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;Source: &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=Kal_Bishop" target="_new"&gt;http://EzineArticles.com/?expert=Kal_Bishop&lt;/a&gt;&lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://ezinearticles.com/?Screenwriting-Process---Ten-Steps-to-a-First-Draft&amp;amp;id=72004" target="_new"&gt;http://EzineArticles.com/?Screenwriting-Process---Ten-Steps-to-a-First-Draft&amp;amp;id=72004&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-3573074424785910417?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/3573074424785910417/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/screenwriting-process-ten-steps-to.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/3573074424785910417'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/3573074424785910417'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/screenwriting-process-ten-steps-to.html' title='Screenwriting Process - Ten Steps to a First Draft'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpmPTHSx5sI/AAAAAAAACZE/YqeP7E2efTk/s72-c/male_torso203x203.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-6723090181907004130</id><published>2009-08-27T13:46:00.010-05:00</published><updated>2009-10-09T21:56:09.775-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='product reviews'/><title type='text'>Marshall Plan Novel Writing Software Review</title><content type='html'>Here's a 12-minute video that shows exactly what it's like to start working with &lt;a href="http://www.writeanovelfast.com/x.php?a=r&amp;amp;id=26604_1803_4412"&gt;The Marshall Plan Novel Writing Software&lt;/a&gt;. (12 min. 14 sec.) 
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&lt;a href="http://www.writeanovelfast.com/x.php?a=r&amp;amp;id=26604_1803_4412"&gt;The Marshall Plan Novel Writing Software&lt;/a&gt; could help novelists who are writing novels that:
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- have come to a screeching halt,
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- have become a giant, unwieldly blob,
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- are never going to be finished because nothing happens in the story (and you, the author, are bored).
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Those are all structural problems. Programs and courses that focus on novel structure can save a project by streamlining the action and helping you, the author, get your characters to focus on a goal and fight to accomplish it.
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&lt;i&gt;Links in this post are affiliate links.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-6723090181907004130?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/6723090181907004130/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/heres-12-minute-video-that-shows.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/6723090181907004130'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/6723090181907004130'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/heres-12-minute-video-that-shows.html' title='Marshall Plan Novel Writing Software Review'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-7126515414580068818</id><published>2009-08-26T16:36:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2010-09-12T16:28:04.925-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Free Stuff'/><title type='text'>Karen Moning's 'Dark Fever' FREE!</title><content type='html'>&lt;p&gt;&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SoxBXX_WCMI/AAAAAAAACSw/8L9sRXFJBQU/s1600-h/KarenMoningDarkFever300x300.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0pt 10px 10px 0pt; float: left; cursor: pointer; width: 300px; height: 300px;" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SoxBXX_WCMI/AAAAAAAACSw/8L9sRXFJBQU/s400/KarenMoningDarkFever300x300.jpg" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5371740325378656450" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/p&gt;It's your lucky day!
&lt;p&gt;New York Times bestselling author, &lt;a href="http://www.karenmoning.com/"&gt;Karen
 Moning&lt;/a&gt;, has a link on her website so you can download a FREE copy of the
 first book in the Fever Series--aptly titled &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Dark Fever&lt;/span&gt;--as a .pdf. &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Click on this link for &lt;a href="http://a1018.g.akamai.net/f/1018/19025/1d/randomhouse1.download.akamai.com/19025/freelibrary/darkfeversuvudu.pdf"&gt;Karen
 Moning's &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Dark Fever&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt; novel in its entirety. Gratis. Without cost. Yes,
 free! &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I've read the entire series, loved it, and I'm breathlessly waiting for the
 next book, &lt;a style="font-style: italic;" href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0385341652?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=veglit-20&amp;amp;linkCode=as2&amp;amp;camp=1789&amp;amp;creative=390957&amp;amp;creativeASIN=0385341652"&gt;Dreamfever&lt;/a&gt;&lt;img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=veglit-20&amp;amp;l=as2&amp;amp;o=1&amp;amp;a=0385341652" alt="" style="border: medium none ! important; margin: 0px ! important;" border="0" height="1" width="1" /&gt;. &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;UPDATE: 9/12/10 Sorry, but the free link doesn't work, anymore. I got it to you for free while I could. However, you can currently read the Prologue and Chapter One of &lt;a href="http://www.karenmoning.com/novels/darkfever/DF.pdf"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Darkfever&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt; for free, and you can read the first three chapters of &lt;a href="http://www.karenmoning.com/novels/faefever-preview.html"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Feafever&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt; for free. It's a start.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;One warning, though. &lt;a href="http://www.karenmoning.com/novels/darkfever/DF.pdf"&gt;&lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/a&gt;Darkfever comes up in .pdf on size 350%. When the file first opens, you could read it from space.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;For &lt;span style="font-style: italic;"&gt;Faefever&lt;/span&gt;, they're using Issuu Publishing software, which is very flash (er, Flash). It takes a minute to get used to, but let me know what you think about the software. Once again, I am well impressed with Moning's (or her peoples') use of online technology for promotion. She's still #1 on the ProNovelWriter ProAuthorTech List.
&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-7126515414580068818?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/7126515414580068818/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/karen-monings-dark-fever-free.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/7126515414580068818'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/7126515414580068818'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/karen-monings-dark-fever-free.html' title='Karen Moning&apos;s &apos;Dark Fever&apos; FREE!'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SoxBXX_WCMI/AAAAAAAACSw/8L9sRXFJBQU/s72-c/KarenMoningDarkFever300x300.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-4240266641126266781</id><published>2009-08-22T23:22:00.003-05:00</published><updated>2009-09-10T09:27:38.819-05:00</updated><title type='text'>This Week's NY Times Bestsellers - Hardback Fiction</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpDFMYG0-RI/AAAAAAAACV0/zEWPfyF0dO8/s1600-h/86518_inside_the_news300x300.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="float:left; margin:0 10px 10px 0;cursor:pointer; cursor:hand;width: 300px; height: 300px;" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpDFMYG0-RI/AAAAAAAACV0/zEWPfyF0dO8/s320/86518_inside_the_news300x300.jpg" border="0" alt=""id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5373011171873192210" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;
Books / Best-Seller Lists&lt;br /&gt;
Hardcover Fiction&lt;br /&gt;
Published: August 30, 2009&lt;br /&gt;
Top 5 at a Glance &lt;br /&gt;
1. SOUTH OF BROAD, by Pat Conroy &lt;br /&gt;
2. SMASH CUT, by Sandra Brown &lt;br /&gt;
3. THE HELP, by Kathryn Stockett &lt;br /&gt;
4. THAT OLD CAPE MAGIC, by Richard Russo &lt;br /&gt;
5. THE GIRL WHO PLAYED WITH FIRE, by Stieg Larsson&lt;br /&gt;
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How many have you read?
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For more info, you can go straight to the &lt;a href="http://www.nytimes.com/2009/08/30/books/bestseller/besthardfiction.html"&gt;NY Times bestsellers list&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-4240266641126266781?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/4240266641126266781/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/this-weeks-ny-times-bestsellers.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/4240266641126266781'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/4240266641126266781'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/this-weeks-ny-times-bestsellers.html' title='This Week&apos;s NY Times Bestsellers - Hardback Fiction'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpDFMYG0-RI/AAAAAAAACV0/zEWPfyF0dO8/s72-c/86518_inside_the_news300x300.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-6772053756117068846</id><published>2009-08-22T16:43:00.002-05:00</published><updated>2009-08-29T15:42:43.958-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='State of the Genres'/><title type='text'>But can Steampunk compete?</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SZiHtmYoakI/AAAAAAAAAZ8/ujkLEBR6-yU/s1600-h/spws-logo.gif"&gt;&lt;img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; display: block; text-align: center; cursor: pointer; width: 320px; height: 83px;" src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SZiHtmYoakI/AAAAAAAAAZ8/ujkLEBR6-yU/s320/spws-logo.gif" alt="" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5303137778696481346" border="0" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Okay, &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://steampunkworkshop.com/"&gt;The Steampunk Workshop&lt;/a&gt; is very cool.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://steampunkworkshop.com/steampunk-cake"&gt;steampunk cake&lt;/a&gt; is excellent...&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;...but I'm sorry. When it comes to cake wonderment, nothing I have seen can top the &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/thesmallcatclub/2625647657/"&gt;Tom Selleck Cake&lt;/a&gt;. But thanks for trying.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Thanks, &lt;a rel="nofollow" href="http://dystopium.wordpress.com/"&gt;Boone&lt;/a&gt;, for the great links!&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-6772053756117068846?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/6772053756117068846/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/but-can-steampunk-compete.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/6772053756117068846'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/6772053756117068846'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2009/08/but-can-steampunk-compete.html' title='But can Steampunk compete?'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SZiHtmYoakI/AAAAAAAAAZ8/ujkLEBR6-yU/s72-c/spws-logo.gif' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-7545075805669022142</id><published>2009-08-20T16:40:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2009-08-27T16:41:25.061-05:00</updated><category scheme='http://www.blogger.com/atom/ns#' term='Novelist Humor'/><title type='text'>Your Grammar Lesson for Today</title><content type='html'>&lt;a onblur="try {parent.deselectBloggerImageGracefully();} catch(e) {}" href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SoxTUwcRegI/AAAAAAAACTY/sG9l3zi9x0M/s1600-h/eraser196x196.jpg"&gt;&lt;img style="float:left; margin:0 10px 10px 0;cursor:pointer; cursor:hand;width: 196px; height: 196px;" src="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SoxTUwcRegI/AAAAAAAACTY/sG9l3zi9x0M/s400/eraser196x196.jpg" border="0" alt=""id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5371760071612135938" /&gt;&lt;/a&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;A linguistics professor was lecturing to his English class one day. &lt;br /&gt;
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"In English," he said, "a double negative forms a positive. In some languages, though, such as Russian, a double negative is still a negative. However, there is no language wherein a double positive can form a negative."
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&lt;p&gt;How do you describe your character's physical appearance? It's not always easy to describe your characters without resorting to the cliched "She looked in the mirror and saw..."&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Likewise, setting the scene for each part of your story is an important element of building your fictional world. In fact, some authors go to great lengths to describe the weather patterns, the scenery and the passing traffic in detail so that the reader has a sense of the world around the characters.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;This kind of descriptive narrative can sometimes be long and cumbersome. It can also bog down the pace of your story if not done right - especially when all the gurus are saying Show - don't tell!&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Many authors are careful to explain exactly what is going on in their fictional worlds. What people look like, what objects around them look like, what characters are thinking about, how the weather is behaving, the precise color of an object, what characters are seeing around them... This means the author is telling the reader what to see.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Not many authors actually take the time to write HOW their characters are seeing the things that are going on around them. This is where the author should be showing the reader what's happening. Your own characters are a perfect tool to use when you need to show events or appearances or even moods.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Let me explain...&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Every person on the planet sees life through their own personal perceptions. How they choose to interpret those perceptions is largely up to that person and can be affected by a multitude of factors.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;These differing perceptions are what make us unique as human beings. What excites one person may repel another. What one person sees as attractive, another may find repulsive. What one character yearns for may send another character into panic attacks.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;For example: A sunny day might brighten the mood of one character and seriously frighten a person with a phobia of skin cancer. The same sunny day would therefore have a completely different effect on the latter character and would skew many of his other perceptions, too.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The same is true for personal relationship preferences. Some people are attracted to curvaceous women, while others are repelled by them. Still others prefer the exotic features of Asian people while others veer toward the svelte, slinky blonde types and others still just love the creamy coffee colored skin tones and dark features of some Mediterranean people.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Because we all have such different tastes and opinions, these perceptions of what we find appealing and unappealing will color your descriptions of those things.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Remembering to use these differences in character perspective can add depth to your characters by showing your readers much about their personalities - all without actually using narrative to TELL your readers what's going on.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Show, Don't Tell&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;So how does a writer show things happening, or describe another character, without resorting to large chunks of descriptive narrative AND remember to add the unique perspective of the character at the same time?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The simple answer is: &lt;strong&gt;Dialogue&lt;/strong&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;When your characters talk to each other, you should be using the opportunity to express much more than simply words. Dialogue can propel your plotline, it can highlight the importance of conflicts, it can show character perspective and it can show the reader many other things - all at once.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"&lt;em&gt;I hate this miserable rain. All I can do is sit around and mope in the house until it stops&lt;/em&gt;," Fred said.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"&lt;em&gt;If we run, we can get to the stream and catch some frogs. The rain always brings out the frogs!&lt;/em&gt;" Jack called.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;In just two sentences within the dialogue tags, I have (hopefully) conveyed something about the weather, given a sense of the character's mood, described what the character is doing, and given each character a unique perspective on what is happening.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Both characters are viewing the rain in a completely different way - and neither of the above examples required lengthy blocks of narrative to achieve the same effect.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Describing Physical Traits&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"&lt;em&gt;Jane tossed her long golden tresses over her shoulder to flow down her slender back. Running the tip of her tongue over wide, full lips, her emerald green eyes glinted with a hint of promise to come and she crossed her long, supple legs slowly.&lt;/em&gt;"&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"John ran a perfectly manicured hand through his raven black hair, his sparkling blue eyes taking in every inch of her..."&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Have you ever read a book in which the characters are described in unwieldy chunks of narrative as though they were no more than cardboard cut-outs of a Barbie and Ken promotional poster?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;In over-exaggerated examples like the ones above, it is obvious that the 'narrator' has stopped the story and interrupted you - the reader! - to remind you how fabulous the author wants you to think these people look.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The problem with this approach is the author has forgotten that all readers have different opinions on what's attractive. More importantly, her characters should be the ones voicing their thoughts and preferences.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;So is it necessary to include these bland descriptions in your narrative at all?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Recently I read a lengthy book (1,050 pages). The book was very detailed, the scope was sweeping and the cast was huge. Yet nowhere in the entire book did the author mention what any of the characters looked like during his narrative. He only ever offered his character's perceptions of other characters. I actually read the book twice to check how the author achieved this effect.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;I found this method to be extremely effective. It showed me each character's viewpoint as a distinct and separate perception. Each person saw different qualities in the people they interacted with, so the physical traits altered to suit those perceptions with each description. He did the same thing with certain furnishings, scenery, weather patterns and moods. Every description in the book came from another character commenting on it in some way that was relevant to the story.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Indirect Description&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Several times throughout the book the author made references to certain features to identify who people were talking about. For example, the main character had a scar running along the left side of his face. The reader only knows this because we saw it through another character's eyes during the dialogue - and not in a narrative description.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"&lt;em&gt;...I tell you, Stan, when Alec glared at me with those dead eyes, I nearly passed out with fear. I knew he was angry when hideous scar started to twitch. When it does that, the whole left side of his face contorts and you just know he's thinking he wants to cut your throat...&lt;/em&gt;"&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;And yet - a different character describes Alec this way:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"&lt;em&gt;...Miranda sighed and let her chin rest in the cup of her hand. "He's got those deep, dreamy blue eyes. The kind you just want to get lost in, I guess. And when he looks at me, his scar jumps - like he's trying to hold back a smile.&lt;/em&gt;"&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;These two people are describing the same character - Alec. One perceives him as hard and violent. The other sees him as dreamy.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;During the book a male character tried to tell Alec what a woman looked like (she was the target for an assassination).&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;"&lt;em&gt;The target has the classic hooker look. Bleached blonde, cleavage on display for anyone to see and legs that go forever under a cheap leather mini. And a face that could break concrete. Hard as nails, she is&lt;/em&gt;."&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;That was HIS perception of the person - not the actual physical traits of the woman in question. Alec found her sweet and attractive, but those were his perceptions of her, so of course they differed.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Nowhere in any of those descriptions did the author say "5 feet 10 inches, blonde, 98 pounds, blue eyes, full lips". His descriptions only encompassed what the person doing the describing saw through his or her own perceptions.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Adding small differences in the way your characters view the objects around them will add a sense of realism to your work and bring depth to your characters.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;Lee Masterson is a freelance writer from South Australia. She is also the editor of Fiction Factor - &lt;a target="_new" href="http://www.fictionfactor.com"&gt;http://www.fictionfactor.com&lt;/a&gt; - a free online magazine for writers, offering tips and advice on getting published, articles to improve your writing skills, heaps of writer's resources and much more. Article Source: &lt;a href="http://ezinearticles.com/?expert=Lee_Masterson" target="_new"&gt;http://EzineArticles.com/?expert=Lee_Masterson&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;a href="http://ezinearticles.com/?Adding-Character-Depth-Through-Perception&amp;id=2589206" target="_new"&gt;http://EzineArticles.com/?Adding-Character-Depth-Through-Perception&amp;id=2589206&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/7546252707651906399-3105352861935340903?l=www.pronovelwriter.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/feeds/3105352861935340903/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2008/01/adding-character-depth-through.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/3105352861935340903'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/7546252707651906399/posts/default/3105352861935340903'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.pronovelwriter.com/2008/01/adding-character-depth-through.html' title='Adding Character Depth Through Perception'/><author><name>eTF</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><media:thumbnail xmlns:media='http://search.yahoo.com/mrss/' url='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_T29dTqw6ays/SpCraxxu2eI/AAAAAAAACVk/gnLI_zsPYV4/s72-c/561758_macrocosm300x300.jpg' height='72' width='72'/><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546252707651906399.post-7521176365533313805</id><published>2000-09-12T19:22:00.000-05:00</published><updated>2010-09-12T19:22:50.870-05:00</updated><title type='text'>Privacy Policy</title><content type='html'>&lt;span style="font-weight: bold;"&gt;What information do we collect?&lt;/span&gt;


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